Love & hurt

Poetic Dan

Only time can give you the picture that's worth a thousand words

Only memories give you the motivation to put it all in verse

The rest is for living in between the love &  hurt

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2022 03:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: I thought there was nothing else to add to this after being inspired by a fellow poets comment last night but work up and about to post, then the last one came to mind....although I then had to pick sun & earth or love & hurt. Maybe I should of done both lol Hope we all have a motivational week! Happy Monday!
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Comments4

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Memories are so important . So lucky if we have a lot of good ones ..

    A nice writing , Dan )

    • Poetic Dan

      Never to late to start making even better ones...

      Thank you my friend

    • dusk arising

      I think that right now Dan you are making some of the best memories which you will re-live time and again.... and better times are ahead. Do you feel a better man now tthat you know you are one?

      • Poetic Dan

        Ha ha, absolutely love the way you've worded that buddy! Yes I should feel better for knowing but yet I still have that bar sat a bit to high lol

        I'm slowly coming down to as you said, live and make some of the best memories to date!

      • spilleronsheet

        A few lines conveyed a tale
        Such beauty dictating as you nail
        The verse went deeper imbibed
        Coated with many verses of life
        Truly captivated by the words as you weave by
        May you make more memories
        You already am sure made many
        Or else how would such jewels be created in such beautiful lines

        • Poetic Dan

          Yes at times it can feel like a Life's worth and I should be glad I get another go lol

          Thank you for such a rich comment, got better every time I read it.

        • Goldfinch60

          Most of my memories are so good from my long life Dan, I am sure that yours will be as well.

          Andy

          • Poetic Dan

            If I'm lucky enough I will and take your amazing vibe as I will survive!

            As love carried you through, thank you as ever my friend.

            Always appreciated



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