emotionless?

dusk arising

 

 

what has come over me
where has empathy gone
i read poetry of despair
where once i raised
to contribute hope
words of comfort
offer a warmth
of literary embrace
now my cold shoulder
turns the page in hope
of selfish inspiration
what has come over me

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 11th, 2022 06:00
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  • L. B. Mek

    anger, is often
    the first and easiest of emotions
    for us to turn to
    especially when experiencing
    such unfair
    and all-consuming, bleak passages
    in our lives
    so it's ok, to vent a little or agitate others
    if it works
    to drown-out, that incessant need
    for carnage
    but, just balance it
    with some deeds of kindness
    when the opportunity arises
    we should never: choose
    to let our frustration's, hate
    warp who we are
    in-to some, poisonous existence
    that only inflicts pain
    on strangers, because its easy
    to do so
    especially
    if we were a decent person, to begin with
    that's only hurting ourselves, even more
    in the end,
    dear cherished Poet
    and fellow quester of 'right action'
    amongst
    life's abundance of wrongness...

    • dusk arising

      I noticed this in me and knew it was out of character for me. Thanks LBM.

    • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

      Sometimes we just need to pamper our selves. I was reading Teddys reply. I'm sorry I didn't realize. Take a break,have a Kit KatπŸ€—βœŒπŸŒŸβœŒπŸ•Š

    • Paul Bell

      I'm a day of the week guy.
      Monday- Depressing.
      Tuesday- Weird day.
      Wednesday- We're on the way.

    • woundedheart

      As a sufferer i feel your words and loved your poem my friend ☺

    • Rozina

      We are only human. We have good days, bad days. Could be brilliant tomorrow. All the best.

    • Goldfinch60

      The despair in the poetry has recently become more telling, is it that people are becoming so low in their lives due to the world problems, especially the covid ones.
      We will come out of this as you will d a and life will be good once more.

      Andy

      • dusk arising

        It could be that covid has put us all under additional stress yes, and I'm reacting to my share of that. Been shielding for nearly two years now.

      • sorenbarrett

        don't despair, all is fair. As long as your poems come from your heart. Don't dare your poems to compare
        each one is a new start.
        I liked the message you had



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