Split into two

Poetic Dan

Sometimes we want to split in two, melt on the floor to become something new

Drift along rainbow Road, absorbing colours to become someone bold

Tip toe through the forbidden forest, shedding any unwanted horrors

Washing back up from the depths of our soul, to find no other place called home

This more than a body or a vessel, but a castle with fire to been seen for miles

Let nothing be in our way we're all born to be wild, just wait for stars and ancestors to smile

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 14th, 2022 03:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: First line came to me when putting my little one to bed and trying to get out of the door, the rest came from life and maybe something else I never know. Busy weekend and hope you all have fun! Be what you want
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Caring dove, dusk arising, L. B. Mek, spilleronsheet
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  • Caring dove

    I love this ! One of my favourites from you

    🙂🙂

    Great lines

    Hope you have a good day

    • Poetic Dan

      Yep it's a kids weekend and working so none stop today!

      I hope I can cope with the others on the road too lol

      Keep up the write my friend

    • Rozina

      Enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always a pleasure and a huge thank you!

      • dusk arising

        You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different higher you speaking out. Probably a voice in you that has been quietly crying to be heard beneath the burdens you hide it behind.... let it flow, it's the real core of your spirit.... run with it, doesn't it feel good?

        THis one goes into my favourites.

        • Poetic Dan

          I thought I had more to say but as I read your words again your probably right my friend... Still learning to free myself from myself lol

          Thanks as ever for your time

        • L. B. Mek

          'Tip toe
          through the forbidden forest, shedding
          any unwanted horrors

          Washing back up
          from the depths of our soul, to find
          no other place called home'
          (who needs
          caffeine or a sugar rush
          when poetry like yours
          can fuel me, endlessly...)
          thank you, dear Poet
          for reminding us all
          'to leap:
          for those 'frisbee's' of opportunity
          whilst battling, through our sandpits
          of life...'

          • Poetic Dan

            Ooo my days while waiting for the biggest lady at school pick up, I read you line and clicked my fingers out loud with a big cheer....
            Those lines in return was outstandingly good!

          • Goldfinch60

            May that smile always be looking down on you Dan.

            Andy

            • Poetic Dan

              I'm sure it will my friend, thank you

            • spilleronsheet

              The liens brought me different feel
              It was a bouquet of flowers
              Where each strand told me different story
              Where each heed a different advice
              Where the lines told me different experiences
              And where I could agree by all kind
              Great one dear poetic Dan



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