and now
its not so hard to admit
there's no denying
when you've been
caught out crying
but our milk
was spilled so long ago
and probably
doesn't even show
but it was all
all for you
no going back
after this heart attack
the reality
of yesterday's shadow
has darkened the daylight from my smile
so go on
go on and say, i told you so
and you did it
just there.
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Author:
dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: just another song
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Comments6
In hindsight or with foresight so many things we would change or never do as love is a very bumpy road, great poem friend ☺
Thank you wounded heart.
your title, alone
is better
than most haiku's
and other cropped, poems
I've read in my life, Dusk..
'darkened the daylight
from my smile, so now go on
say, I told you so'
I liked that quirky title, so much can be read into it. We are gifted sometimes as poets that such phrases appear out of thin air. The quirky finale i couldn't resist. Thank you IBM
Deep insight
And such hard breaking lines
A deep iceberg
Epic sir
Thank you spiller.
Just another..... that sings to us all of not maybe they haven't lived yet!
Thanks Dan, stay safe and cheerful too m8.
Beautiful. So few lines with so much meaning.
I'm pleased you saw more than the obvious in this piece, thank you Rozina.
That 'spilled milk' is in the past, leave it there and move on into a drier future, it is there for us all.
Andy
Absolutely agree with that thought, thank you sir!
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