Notice of absence from woundedheart
Sorry due to personal reasons i will be absent for an unknown period of time
Thank you for your friendship and may the Lord watch over you all and keep you safe. β€β€β€β€
Sorry due to personal reasons i will be absent for an unknown period of time
Thank you for your friendship and may the Lord watch over you all and keep you safe. β€β€β€β€
He lay upon the burning beach,
the darkness falling fast.
as to the night he made this speech,
and then he softly past.
My love I made my promise true,
but now i cannot keep.
I swore I would return to you,
but here alone now sleep.
Arrows pierced my beating heart,
the one I gave to you.
And now i fear we two must part,
my love was ever true.
The stars have bleed from foreign skies,
in tribute from above.
Replacing in the firmament,
My heart, my words, my love.
He lay upon the burning beach,
a smile upon his lips.
As his wifes faded photograph,
fell from his finger tips.
- Author: woundedheart ( Offline)
- Published: January 15th, 2022 07:57
- Category: Love
- Views: 40
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Comments7
Thank you its hopefully gonna be a hat trick as last two of these won gold lol π»π
Ahhh you broke my heart, beautiful but so sad π
Thank you but penning these is affecting my free verse though lol ππ
Great work here wh! Nice flow,very sad and touching. So relatable to anyone who's 'been' deeply in love/happily married. Can't say that's me though,but I can dream,... Actually,I'm in love with Josephineππ»π
Thank you for reading and so nice a comment βΊ
A very heart wrenching tale you wove
Made me teary till end
The very result i was hoping for thank you for a sweet comment βΊ
So was I going to do so also, but beach is a tad chilly this time of year! lol.
Not so much Sand as ice I'm guessing fireside sounds better βΊ
Sad, beautiful, emotional. Loved this.
Thank you very much βΊ
Very emotive words wh,.
Andy
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