Lovers Lament

woundedheart


Notice of absence from woundedheart
Sorry due to personal reasons i will be absent for an unknown period of time
Thank you for your friendship and may the Lord watch over you all and keep you safe. ❀❀❀❀

He lay upon the burning beach,
the darkness falling fast.
as to the night he made this speech,
and then he softly past.

My love I made my promise true,
but now i cannot keep.
I swore I would return to you,
but here alone now sleep.

Arrows pierced my beating heart,
the one I gave to you.
And now i fear we two must part,
my love was ever true.

The stars have bleed from foreign skies,
in tribute from above.
Replacing in the firmament,
My heart, my words, my love.

He lay upon the burning beach,
a smile upon his lips.
As his wifes faded photograph,
fell from his finger tips.

  • Author: woundedheart (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 15th, 2022 07:57
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 40
  • User favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet.
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Comments7

  • woundedheart

    Thank you its hopefully gonna be a hat trick as last two of these won gold lol πŸ»πŸ’Ÿ

  • kitty the naughty poet

    Ahhh you broke my heart, beautiful but so sad 😞

    • woundedheart

      Thank you but penning these is affecting my free verse though lol πŸ˜‚πŸ’Ÿ

    • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

      Great work here wh! Nice flow,very sad and touching. So relatable to anyone who's 'been' deeply in love/happily married. Can't say that's me though,but I can dream,... Actually,I'm in love with JosephineπŸ’ƒπŸ»πŸ˜‚

      • woundedheart

        Thank you for reading and so nice a comment ☺

      • spilleronsheet

        A very heart wrenching tale you wove
        Made me teary till end

        • woundedheart

          The very result i was hoping for thank you for a sweet comment ☺

        • orchidee

          So was I going to do so also, but beach is a tad chilly this time of year! lol.

          • woundedheart

            Not so much Sand as ice I'm guessing fireside sounds better ☺

          • Rozina

            Sad, beautiful, emotional. Loved this.

            • woundedheart

              Thank you very much ☺

            • Goldfinch60

              Very emotive words wh,.

              Andy



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