The one percent that matters

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  Fay Slimm. January 17th, 2022 06:25

  What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 17th, 2022 08:08

    So glad that you liked it dear Fay
    Much appreciated
    Thanks for such sweet words

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  L. B. Mek January 17th, 2022 08:24

  'took
  the dose of forgiveness
  surpassed those;
  
  those, negligent of pain
  burned the letter
  of fall and failures
  
  took
  the vaccine of ignorance
  to those
  needless criticisms
  
  immune to blames
  immune to stares'..
  write, ink it all out
  till we can, distil any milk
  as, an iota of a messy
  theoretical, explanation
  out of all
  this abundance of senselessness
  threatening, to drown-out
  our sensibility's and sense...
  (a great read, dear Poet
  thank you)

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 17th, 2022 09:54

    Thanks a lot dear Mek and i totally agree in those lines of you
    Shall ink it all
    Though a messy expression
    I shall try to refine more

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  Neville January 17th, 2022 10:59

  
  .. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
  

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 17th, 2022 11:02

    Glad you could feel lighter after going through it
    Looks like the poetry served its duty rightly
    Thank you so much dear Neville for the kind comments

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  FallenAngel1🕊 January 17th, 2022 11:20

  I've tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 17th, 2022 12:42

    So glad fallenangel
    The words became precious if it could ease others
    Keep practising meditation
    One day you will be able to detach for that moment

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  Rozina January 17th, 2022 22:52

  Words that give me hope, thank you so much.

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 17th, 2022 23:01

    Thanks a lot dear Rozina
    I am glad the words could sow the seed of hope

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  Goldfinch60 January 18th, 2022 01:49

  Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
  
  Andy

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 18th, 2022 02:49

    Thank you so much dear Andy
    Much appreciated

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  AuburnScribbler January 18th, 2022 10:37

  Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
  
  Though it's clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the "crunch" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
  
  Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 18th, 2022 12:21

    Thanks dear AS
    Burn the oil and the fat
    Let’s make them aware of our arrival

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  Paul Bell January 18th, 2022 10:58

  I've always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I've just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I'm still trying hard at it.

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    spilleronsheetJanuary 18th, 2022 12:23

    You shall
    Keep transcending and going through
    Meditation is a miracle and has to be done almost regularly
    And slowly you will seep in that magic
    It’s just magical
    That feel