Checking the Night Sky
Quite unlike any other
man made
or farm furrowed field ..
Her brow,
ridged deep and set
like some
rare stone silvered ..
Yet held
more firmly and high
above those
matched arches proud ..
Indeed,
each orb a special blue ..
Perfectly
aligned and celebrated
in night skies,
around the globe, just like
I am doing now ..
But throughout all of history ..
-
Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: January 18th, 2022 02:59
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 64
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, spilleronsheet.
Offline)
Comments8
There's some giant asteroid thingy passing by Earth tonight (Tues) I think it is. About a million miles or more away from us though (phew).
Meanwhile - can I meet her?! lol.
Blimey, eye shall have to keep my I's open tonight & that's for sure ................................................ I shall go check her number for you sir 🙂
Faced with endurance those ridges seen with poetic vision glow like jewels within this prose-piece of personified skill -- a pleasure as always Nev. to re-read and guess your clever inferences in this night-sky tribute of perception's alliterative treat............x
Ooh err, did I do all that, my word .. then I happily plead guilty m lady ...................... thank you Fay 🙂 x
poetry like fine wine, needs to age
so its juices can blossom
into a deeper, velvet of subtly nuanced
flavour,
I imagine, upon reading this
for the tenth time
I'll glean a hundred percent, more
of its poetic, sublime...
(love the flow
and that, smack in the face
last line)
just more of your poetic elegance
showcasing itself, once again
dear Poet
You do realise 1) I aint ever gonna be able to pay you back dont'cha
2) the cheque I sent yesterday will probably bounce
3) I really do appreciate your ongoing support
4) they really ought to make it easier to format these responses
5) I aint kidding when I said up there I that I appreciate your support
6) Cheers ..................................... Neville 🙂
lmao
(forgive me, my overzealous enthusiasm
can be overwhelmingly irritating, to some
just let me know, before
I push you too far and you get annoyed
so I can do me best to tone it down;
for some reason
the fool in me, just can't seem to do it
unless prompted)
and bounced cheques are always fun
as 'keepy uppy' practise
while learning, to juggle life..
A beautiful imagery
Woven in nature
Woven with fantasy in my dreams
As if a dream was painted
Lost in the jewel studded in sky
So was the deep poetry that you laid in those lines
So surreal
again, you spoil me spiller & I am truly grateful to you my friend ....................... N x
A beautiful description in your lines.
thank you Rozina .................................. thank you very much indeed ............. Neville 🙂
what a wonderfully written, image filled poem, with a bit of mystical intrigue...beautifully done!
thank you my friend, what a treat to find your heart-warming & otherwise encouraging little note on arriving back home this evening & before my bedtime mug of cocoa ... 🙂 Neville
You're most welcome, my new friend, I wish a restful night 🙂
I really like your choice of words 🙂
Great poem and good flow , too
Bless you dear yellowrose ................................... 🙂
The night sky is so wonderful and the moon overseeing our lives is so special within them.
Did you howl at the wolf moon this week? LOL
Andy
Of course, who dare not .. wasn't she an absolute delight .. thanks Andy ................. Neville 🙂
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.