FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

Let Your Spirit Fly

Let your spirit fly 

set you mind free 

take a stellar trip beyond reality

 

Sail away into the night 

upon a ship of sail and flight

into the cosmos so majestically 

 

Passing stars by

as they twinkle,shimmer and shine

and gigantic spheres without gravity 

 

The further out we go

the more time seems to slow 

as we peer back with visions of the whole galaxy 

 

Into deeper space we race

with such a warm embrace

where Angels dance with blazing stars so gleefully 

 

And they dance through rings of fire

leaving coloured sparks and streaks of light across the universe

with trails of feathers burning so beautifully

 

As they dance with such elegance upon gamma rays

into stunning nebulae

so free,so beautiful and gracefully.

 

Comments10

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Love this and you mention angels !

    Beautiful writing πŸ™‚

    • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

      It was posted by accident,..it's not quite done,..but thank you roseπŸ’πŸ˜€

    • kitty the naughty poet

      I really like this you did a great job dear friend

      • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

        Thanks Katie,..if you go to page 5 of all my poems,you'll fine one called True loves kiss. Ever since I wrote it a number of years ago I've thought it could be so much more,..so this was my attempt to tweek it into so much more.πŸ˜ŠβœŒπŸ•Š

        • kitty the naughty poet

          That's cool I will go check it out

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        • orchidee

          Yep, I'm gonna fly!
          Must fix these wings. Last time I was 'The Birdman' and crashed! lol.

          • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

            And let me guess,..you landed on your headπŸ˜‚βœŒοΈπŸ•Š

          • Neville


            Not only could this reader feel the whooooosh whilst savouring each individual stanza ... he also did as he was requested to do & can see even more clearly where you are coming from ................ and maybe even going to ................. Neville πŸ™‚

          • Teddy.15

            Poetry i can certainly get on board with, a.cosmic experience, well done Joseph. πŸ’–

          • spilleronsheet

            A beautiful read
            My imagination flew high with the poetic lines
            Space the fav of mine
            Well penned dear poet

          • dusk arising

            I'm there mate, regularly. Flights of fancy are my wonderland.

            • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

              Thanks dusk,.dont worry about the beer,I got lotsπŸ»πŸ˜€

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful poem that means so much to me. Strangely I have just written a poem for today that is of a similar idea.

              Andy

            • Rozina

              Yes I can feel myself flying higher and higher above the clouds and it's a wonderful feeling. Great job.

              • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

                Thank you Rozina,I'm so glad you were able to come along πŸš€πŸ˜‰

              • pearlsofdew22

                Such an amazing poem, definitely took me to the most fantastic moment out of this world, just wonderful!

                • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

                  Wow!πŸ˜„ Thanks for such kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it soπŸ˜‰πŸŒΉβœŒοΈπŸ•Š



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