Let your spirit fly
set you mind free
take a stellar trip beyond reality
Sail away into the night
upon a ship of sail and flight
into the cosmos so majestically
Passing stars by
as they twinkle,shimmer and shine
and gigantic spheres without gravity
The further out we go
the more time seems to slow
as we peer back with visions of the whole galaxy
Into deeper space we race
with such a warm embrace
where Angels dance with blazing stars so gleefully
And they dance through rings of fire
leaving coloured sparks and streaks of light across the universe
with trails of feathers burning so beautifully
As they dance with such elegance upon gamma rays
into stunning nebulae
so free,so beautiful and gracefully.
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W.J.G.🕊 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Using one of the fastest crafts ever developed,the voyager 1 space prop,it would take roughly 1,736,809 years to travel 100 light years,travelling at its maximum velocity of 62,140 klm. The closest nebula to earth is 700 light years away,according to google. If you go to page 5 of all my poems,you'll find one called True Loves Kiss,..I always thought it could be so much more. This was my attempt to turn it into so much more. Thanks ,hope you enjoy 😀✌️🕊
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Comments9
Love this and you mention angels !
Beautiful writing 🙂
It was posted by accident,..it's not quite done,..but thank you rose💐😀
I really like this you did a great job dear friend
Thanks Katie,..if you go to page 5 of all my poems,you'll fine one called True loves kiss. Ever since I wrote it a number of years ago I've thought it could be so much more,..so this was my attempt to tweek it into so much more.😊✌🕊
That's cool I will go check it out
👍🏻😘
Yep, I'm gonna fly!
Must fix these wings. Last time I was 'The Birdman' and crashed! lol.
And let me guess,..you landed on your head😂✌️🕊
Not only could this reader feel the whooooosh whilst savouring each individual stanza ... he also did as he was requested to do & can see even more clearly where you are coming from ................ and maybe even going to ................. Neville 🙂
Thanks Neville,..with much appreciation😀
A beautiful read
My imagination flew high with the poetic lines
Space the fav of mine
Well penned dear poet
Thanks so much spiller🚀 😀
I'm there mate, regularly. Flights of fancy are my wonderland.
Thanks dusk,.dont worry about the beer,I got lots🍻😀
Wonderful poem that means so much to me. Strangely I have just written a poem for today that is of a similar idea.
Andy
Thanks Andy,🍻😉
Yes I can feel myself flying higher and higher above the clouds and it's a wonderful feeling. Great job.
Thank you Rozina,I'm so glad you were able to come along 🚀😉
Such an amazing poem, definitely took me to the most fantastic moment out of this world, just wonderful!
Wow!😄 Thanks for such kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it so😉🌹✌️🕊
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