Like a Lark on the Rise

Neville

Like a Lark on the Rise

 

Maybe it is time now

we sail

our separate ways ..

With you

upon the wind my love

and me

beneath the waves ..

Yes maybe

it is time now, to say our

fond goodbyes ..

With me upon the down

my love,

and you, just like some

fabled lark

now free and firmly on the rise ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2022 03:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hope these words speak for themselves & might one day be sung highly .... I dont mean on an aeroplane ........ but if they are, I sincerely thank thee kindly :)
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 61
  • Users favorite of this poem: FallenAngel1🕊, dusk arising
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  • kitty the naughty poet

    This is beautiful

    • Neville



      Thank you kindly Katie, a most welcome visit & truly tooly ............... Neville 🙂

    • orchidee

      Goodbye! Will they meet again?

      • Neville



        ......................... maybe .. but if you hear anything, would you let me know .. I still have a few bits I need to return as soon as they come back from the dry cleaners 🙂

      • Caring dove

        Beautiful words ))

        • Neville



          who in their write mind needs more words than that ..................................... thank you YR 🙂

        • spilleronsheet

          It’s the forbidden love in my eyes
          When in complexity facing the dire
          The lovers had to choose separate over time
          Very endearing poetry

          • Neville



            thank you kindly .. when it comes to poetry, you have a brilliant eye spiller .. but then, I am sure they both are .. here's a little x on the lids of both of them ........................................................................................ N 🙂

          • Rozina

            Poignant. Beautiful goodbye.

            • Neville



              ......................... Neva say goodbye Roz ................................................ Hello & thank you my very kind friend 🙂

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              Stunningly beautiful🌟🌟🌟

              • Neville



                ....................... what an awesome thing to suggest my friend ............ thank you no end .. N 🙂

              • Fay Slimm.

                Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu've dun it agen for me with that fab title and final line...........x.

                • Neville



                  .................. a review to cherish .. thank you dear Fay ...................................... 🙂 x

                • Draven

                  This resonates. Lovely.

                  • Neville



                    good to hear Draven .. maybe we should go for a lay down ..................................... 🙂

                  • dusk arising

                    Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more respectful way could there be for a parting of two who once trod the finest path but now should part.

                    The emotion carries such elegance.

                    Into my favourites for sure

                    • Neville



                      Blimey ........................................................................................... cheers mate 🙂

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Super words Neville.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        thank you sir Andy .............................................. Neville 🙂



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