Invitation

Fay Slimm.

 

Invitation.

 

Come my dearling,

lay yourself under this 

naked sheet of love's longing

alongside of me.

 

Give shape to absence 

of sated desire and throw 

time backwards to when our

latent bedding glowed.

 

Come let us relish

coverless passion again

and forget any taken offence

for sanity's sake.

 

Hurl away pay-back,

uncurl crazy resentment 

and  heed this last invitation

to mend what matters.

 

Come my lover

bend to my lips and

unleash the treasure we can

still give each to each. 

 

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2022 04:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    Beautiful words , Fay πŸ™‚πŸŒΈπŸŒΈ

    • Fay Slimm.

      So pleased you enjoyed it dear Rose.

    • spilleronsheet

      A very different genre from you miss Fay
      So intense

      • Fay Slimm.

        Hhhmmm - well I like to write gentle erotica sometimes spills but dont often post the result as they tend to turn out intense.

      • Neville



        this is splendid & on so very many different levels .. if you could just let me have your number again, I'll set off straight after me breakfast

        .. surely one of your very finest Fay .. Neville x

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha - - number is ex-directory Nev. but will whisper it when you've had ya fill - (of breakfast of course ) - - - for you are kinder than kind in your welcome review of Invitation..........................x

        • orchidee

          Good write Fay.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Your visit is always appreciated my friend and thank you for reading Invitation.

          • Keith

            Beautiful in every way - wonderful form - not only do you have a touch of Hopkins I sense the spirit of John Donne within your style also! Impressive.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ah - strange you should mention Donne - he always appeals to my sense of the spiritual in the physical - - maybe it is that we have the same birthday (Jan 22nd ) though I hasten to say he was born before me ! - -- glad you enjoyed the read Keith - my sincere thank you for your considered review.

            • Rozina

              Such an invitation cannot be rejected. Beautiful.

            • Paul Bell

              Nothing better than a bit of erotica to cheer your day up. I'm in the throes of desire, though it could also be delirium.

            • dusk arising

              Yes, when so much has been right there can be a place to put away the wrong. What finer place than there, where together you celebrate the beauty and ecstacy of love's riches.

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful lovelorn words Fay.

              Andy



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