like sunlight caught
in the pearl lustre
of a seashell's secret
her presence
lit halls of otherness
before his eyes
like sunlight caught
in the pearl lustre
of a seashell's secret
her presence
lit halls of otherness
before his eyes
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Lovely words , dusk )) love your poem 🙂🙂
Thank you Rose.
the little gasp I just set free had nothing to do with envy .. honest ......... maybe ..................... N
LOL She was prettier than you.
Obviously a very beautiful woman. Wow dusky just when I thought your imagery couldn't be more a statement to your talent you post this. Gushing here. Your title so clever.
Awww we are all sukkers for that seashell lustre aren't we. I'd live in a seashell if i could find one big enough.
Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a read and now in my faves.
Honoured to have this in your fav's. I'm pleased you liked this one.
The words captivated me and ring like an echo over and over. I loved it
Ah, it was probably the magic of that seashell which did it. Thank you for leaving such a nice comment.
Wonder who the lady was
Who would fall for these gilded lines
Such beauty in these lines of poetry
Speechless I am
This was for the lady of my imagination, a mixture of the lovelies I have known. Beauty beheld has a romance all of its own....
WOW dusk! The sunlight caught in the pearl lustre of a seashells secret. That's striking ⚡️ Um? Otherness? Other path ways?😳
Otherness = where your mind romances ideas in the presence of a beautiful woman... a very polite way of putting it. LOL
You just made me smile 😊
Wow! A magical lady. Stunning.
Aha.... she was there in your mind's eye all along. Thank you rozina.
Wonderful words d a.
Andy
Thank you Andy. It was a wonderful thought romancing with these images.
Amazing. Speechless.
Wow! hey it's only a few words..... and she was just a romantic notion.... (sigh).. if only.
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