dusk arising

halls of otherness

 

 

like sunlight caught
in the pearl lustre
of a seashell's secret
her presence 
lit halls of otherness
before his eyes

Comments10

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Lovely words , dusk )) love your poem 🙂🙂

  • Neville



    the little gasp I just set free had nothing to do with envy .. honest ......... maybe ..................... N

    • dusk arising

      LOL She was prettier than you.

    • Teddy.15

      Obviously a very beautiful woman. Wow dusky just when I thought your imagery couldn't be more a statement to your talent you post this. Gushing here. Your title so clever.

      • dusk arising

        Awww we are all sukkers for that seashell lustre aren't we. I'd live in a seashell if i could find one big enough.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a read and now in my faves.

        • dusk arising

          Honoured to have this in your fav's. I'm pleased you liked this one.

        • sorenbarrett

          The words captivated me and ring like an echo over and over. I loved it

          • dusk arising

            Ah, it was probably the magic of that seashell which did it. Thank you for leaving such a nice comment.

          • spilleronsheet

            Wonder who the lady was
            Who would fall for these gilded lines
            Such beauty in these lines of poetry
            Speechless I am

            • dusk arising

              This was for the lady of my imagination, a mixture of the lovelies I have known. Beauty beheld has a romance all of its own....

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              WOW dusk! The sunlight caught in the pearl lustre of a seashells secret. That's striking ⚡️ Um? Otherness? Other path ways?😳

              • dusk arising

                Otherness = where your mind romances ideas in the presence of a beautiful woman... a very polite way of putting it. LOL

                • FallenAngel1🕊

                  You just made me smile 😊

                • Rozina

                  Wow! A magical lady. Stunning.

                  • dusk arising

                    Aha.... she was there in your mind's eye all along. Thank you rozina.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Wonderful words d a.

                    Andy

                    • dusk arising

                      Thank you Andy. It was a wonderful thought romancing with these images.

                    • kivous

                      Amazing. Speechless.

                      • dusk arising

                        Wow! hey it's only a few words..... and she was just a romantic notion.... (sigh).. if only.



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