dusk arising

bird of love

 

 

peace is
the bird
who sings
in my heart
pouring
the sweet
aromatic
oil of love
over life
        

Comments9

  • Teddy.15

    Filled with emotion, this just makes me feel happy to be alive and it's so romantic. Love indeed pour it everywhere dear dusk. πŸ’– Stunning poetry in just a few words πŸ₯°

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Beautiful poem , dusk )) lovely words πŸ™‚

  • Goldfinch60

    So very true d a.

    Andy

  • Fay Slimm.

    Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear Dusk -- a further example of your talent with words - - keep that peaceful and healing song flowing my friend. Great read.

  • spilleronsheet

    I am now a fan of these short lines
    I wish those birds to fly inside
    Very good one dear Dusk

  • kivous

    Beautiful. Just loved it!

  • L. B. Mek

    beautifully worded, Dusk
    those first 9 words had a somewhat, magical
    effect on me
    as-if a resounding sense of calmness
    just seeped-in, to soothe
    my callouses and aches of life

  • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

    Such a talent you have dusk,..so few words,..so much feeling😊

  • Rozina

    So lovely.



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