peace is
the bird
who sings
in my heart
pouring
the sweet
aromatic
oil of love
over life
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dusk arising (
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Beautiful poem , dusk )) lovely words 🙂
So very true d a.
Andy
Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear Dusk -- a further example of your talent with words - - keep that peaceful and healing song flowing my friend. Great read.
I am now a fan of these short lines
I wish those birds to fly inside
Very good one dear Dusk
beautifully worded, Dusk
those first 9 words had a somewhat, magical
effect on me
as-if a resounding sense of calmness
just seeped-in, to soothe
my callouses and aches of life
Such a talent you have dusk,..so few words,..so much feeling😊
So lovely.
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