I know we really don't want to but we always will, carry that great weight with loves support at our heals.
Sometimes it can be seen, although often it can not. The moments when we feel broken and it's all illusions holding up
Yet between the ordinary and bland, spectacular or grand. You'll see lines in the palm, now trace back on golden sands.
With a gift of holding anothers hand.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It's been a really long week and l've struggled on most days but crying out the frustration and overwhelming feelings we still went and found the most beautiful natural healing... now its Friday and the weekend is free just to be me! Hopefully lol keep up the write
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Lovely words , Dan 🙂 sorry to hear of your struggles this week
That's OK at least I'm still here and trying my best to shine! It's all we can do, one rhyme at a time..
Always appreciate yours my friend
I love seeing vids of your beautiful daughter growing up.
That wonderful trust from a tiny one when they reach out to hold your hand - priceless even though it may be an everyday experience and taken for granted.
So true my friend I thought the first two would be holding it forever but now it's all a memory and hopefully keep helping me appreciate this one that little bit more!
Have a wonderful weekend buddy
May those golden sands fill your life forever Dan.
Such a wonderful video showing such a very happy young lady exploring her world knowing that dad is always there for her.
Andy
I plan on staying in track this time around my friend.
She definitely is growing fast but I'll keep up lol
loved the imagery of the 'lines in the palm'
and the 'trace back on golden sands'
what a succinct distillation of the passing of Time...
(beautifully woven
your words only outshined, by her Sparkling smile)
thanks for sharing, my friend
we almost there
ten more days and this long January will be over
and Spring will be teasing it us, with its reinvigorating
arrival...
Ha that so true spring is not far away but I'm sure February will have a lot to say..
Always appreciated my friend
bloomin heck .. she's bloomin sir Dan .. love the sentiment you just pinned beneath her image & brief clip ... my word how time flies ................ 🙂 x
Blink of an eye and I can't lie still looking forward to easier communication lol
Always appreciated my friend
So emotional
The words are simply jewels coming straight from heart
And so adorable kid
Spilling all I know my good friend! And thank you she does shine bright!
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