Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

The world in their lap

The world in their lap 

an expression of everything 

sitting between gentle hands 

mountains , sad sighing sky’s 

a few seconds of rainbows 

appearing then leaving your gentle fingertips 

green grass resting with flowers growing from a little sad wanting seed

smiling petals below your searching eyes 

 

the world in their lap 

an expression of everything good sitting by your side 

so much beauty , merry mountains 

and birds singing tender loving tones 

 

but the world in my lap 

no thanks 

the grey clouds are too loud 

the thunder too much 

others fears and worries too much for one mind 

 

merry mountains , yes please 

sparkly sun 

birds singing tender tones 

upbeat music 

 

but the world in my lap would be 

simply too much to carry 

Comments6

  • spilleronsheet

    Again one of the words that hit the strings of my heart
    The wishful thinking
    The world full of fantasies
    Yet no denial the heavy duties obscure the presents the earth holds
    The world is beautiful yet no time to praise that beauty
    Great words dear Rose

  • orchidee

    Good write Rose.

  • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

    This is beautiful rose,.l really love it. The ending is so superbπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒžπŸ’

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Thankyou fallen Angel πŸ™‚πŸŒ› to me , the expression makes me think of so much good , but I guess we wouldn’t want so much negative ,. I liked writing this one , I’m glad you liked this and thanks for making it a favourite ))

    • Michael Edwards

      Super rounded piece - great write.

    • dusk arising

      If you're looking for a job then I'd like you to be in charge of the weather please.
      Blue skies and your cotton wool clouds please.
      Lovely poetry Rose.

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes it would be too much but selecting parts of that world to sit on our laps would be marvellous.

      Andy



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