Closed

spilleronsheet

Wonder 

what struck in mind 

never were it said 

Alas 

you were never bothered 

bothered to read 

read

those eyes 

those silent lips 

and 

the tired face 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2022 04:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Some people fail to notice or take interest in that which is before them .

    A good writing , spiller )

    • spilleronsheet

      Thanks dear Rose
      Indeed
      It’s their ignorance that make them blunt

    • Neville


      this is a tragedy .. and although I feel sure that there are so many other ways of describing what is essentially a hit in my book .. it remains a tragedy and in an ideal world, should never have happened ... but as many of us have long known .. it does .................. Neville x

      • spilleronsheet

        Unfortunately the sad truth not be read at all or misheard in life…so true dear Neville, a tragedy

      • Rozina

        Yes, unfortunately there are people who are not interested, not bothered, in how others are faring. True words.

      • Paul Bell

        Me, me, me comes to mind.
        Sadly, they are plenty of them in the world.

      • FallenAngel1🕊

        "It's their ignorance that makes them blunt" Ignorance,..its a word that reminds me of something my sister said the other day,.."Those who are full of love,confuse those who are full of shit.lol😊✌️🕊

        • spilleronsheet

          True dear fallenangel
          Well your sister said kind of truth….its like show people who are rude your brightest smile…to show them their existence doesn’t bother you

          • FallenAngel1🕊

            That's the act of a very wise person. Also a very strong and patient person.🌞🕊

          • Buzz Bray

            Well said. Wonderful use of language. So few words can convey such disappointment. Great read.

            • spilleronsheet

              Thank you so much dear Buzz…….trying to speak a few words but still need improvement upon that…thanks for stopping by and thank you so much for your kind words
              Much appreciated

            • Goldfinch60

              It is so important to look into peoples eyes to se their real selves.

              Andy

              • spilleronsheet

                Maybe your right..they are afraid to see themselves so they close the eyes

              • AuburnScribbler

                A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.

                Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.

                Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thank you so much dear AuburnScribbler
                  With so called civilization, we are loosing the basic etiquettes of life
                  The sad truth of 21st century

                • Neville



                  the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x

                  • spilleronsheet

                    The humble words got abode
                    The emotions got a stage
                    Surely it felt elated
                    When the critics applauded it great
                    Your words means a lot dear Neville



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