Wonder
what struck in mind
never were it said
Alas
you were never bothered
bothered to read
read
those eyes
those silent lips
and
the tired face
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Some people fail to notice or take interest in that which is before them .
A good writing , spiller )
Thanks dear Rose
Indeed
It’s their ignorance that make them blunt
this is a tragedy .. and although I feel sure that there are so many other ways of describing what is essentially a hit in my book .. it remains a tragedy and in an ideal world, should never have happened ... but as many of us have long known .. it does .................. Neville x
Unfortunately the sad truth not be read at all or misheard in life…so true dear Neville, a tragedy
Yes, unfortunately there are people who are not interested, not bothered, in how others are faring. True words.
Indeed dear Rozina
Me, me, me comes to mind.
Sadly, they are plenty of them in the world.
Is it….i wonder if really?
"It's their ignorance that makes them blunt" Ignorance,..its a word that reminds me of something my sister said the other day,.."Those who are full of love,confuse those who are full of shit.lol😊✌️🕊
True dear fallenangel
Well your sister said kind of truth….its like show people who are rude your brightest smile…to show them their existence doesn’t bother you
That's the act of a very wise person. Also a very strong and patient person.🌞🕊
Well said. Wonderful use of language. So few words can convey such disappointment. Great read.
Thank you so much dear Buzz…….trying to speak a few words but still need improvement upon that…thanks for stopping by and thank you so much for your kind words
Much appreciated
It is so important to look into peoples eyes to se their real selves.
Andy
Maybe your right..they are afraid to see themselves so they close the eyes
A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.
Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
Thank you so much dear AuburnScribbler
With so called civilization, we are loosing the basic etiquettes of life
The sad truth of 21st century
the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x
The humble words got abode
The emotions got a stage
Surely it felt elated
When the critics applauded it great
Your words means a lot dear Neville
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