Why didn’t you stop me?

razlin

I know that I ended it,,

but why didn’t you stop me?

ending us was like ending my life.

my question is,, why?

why didn’t you stop me from bleeding out?

instead of helping me,, you just left me out to die.

so I’m closing my eyes. 

and fading away .

letting the cold air nibble at my skin.

letting my tears be dried in the wind.

im ending my life,,

and saying goodbye.

I don’t care what you say.

its my time,,

my time to die.

  • Author: razlin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2022 15:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • FallenAngel1🕊

    Shockingly scary words to read. I'm sorry for your misfortunes,..🌹🕊🌞

  • Rocky Lagou

    I'm sorry but reading this brought a Mitski song to mind of the same title. It's just how my brain is wired. But I honestly understand the despair of this poem, I also struggle with depression. I hope you can see the light in the darkness. You are loved! 💖

    • razlin

      In all honesty,, I wrote this poem after listening to Mitski’s songs:)))

      • Rocky Lagou

        Okay it's nice to know that I have a fellow Mitski-loving poet on this site! She's a great comfort during the hard times. 💖



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