Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Although I cannot see you, with my little naked eye
I need no telescope, coordinates nor maps to know
you are up there somewhere, shining brightly ..
Yes, looking down on me and mine at night and smiling
and although way out of reach for now maybe ..
My darling, there will always be tomorrow ..
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Author:
Neville (
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What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
How extraordinarily kind thou art my dear lady Fay .......................................... as always .. 🙂 x
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
Just for the record, she is no longer known as 'Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’ Mr. O .. but had her name officially changed many years ago to that of my wife ............................. cheers 🙂
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
how very kind of you my friend ........................ & seriously appreciated too .............. Neville 🙂
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
thank you spiller ..what a lovely comment .. and this one has your cygneture running write through it ........................ x
A "shining brightly" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The love seeps through your words and remains intact with the hope of "tomorrow." A difficult write I would imagine. - Phil A.
this one was Phil ................................. many thanks my friend ........... Neville
Oh so beautiful to read this. Your lines of love to your wife.
thank you kindly Roz ..................................................................... & ever so my friend .. Neville
I feel exactly the same Neville.
Andy
of that, I have no doubt Andy .................. thank you my golden friend ... Neville
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