Love's Tune.
Love, blind to weakness
sees only the perfect
but as dissent appears
hearts can be deflected.
Discord builds turmoil,
destroys melded union
ends coupled harmony
that follows love's due.
We, what we are groan
from sore ego bruises
yet love's tune composes
more than just music.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: February 1st, 2022 05:18
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of reflection on the quote above - - hope you enjoy.
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Comments6
I like this, Fay - could even be crafted into a wonderful sonnet. The abstract nature of love is captured well here.
My gratitude Keith for I was not too sure today of posting what I thought was incomplete -- thanks a load for your kind review.
Amen!
'composes, more
than
just, music'
what a beautifully worded analogy, dear Fay
(More, than the drumming beat
of flustered heart's
and percussion's tapping, fingers
of fearful trepidation
Love's ballads, paint our lives
with a whole orchestic movement
of experience
not merely sample size, melodies...)
Your thoughtful comment sums up the vagaries of love just perfectly L.B. - thank you masses for all your support.
.............. a universal tune at that 🙂 x
Agreed mon ami - -- - love sings a universal song for those who know the tune - -- merci for the review and " pour vous a bientot " .......x
A beautiful quote
With a lovely ode accompanying
Love, a silly music
Lovers the musician banding own melodies
Very beautiful dear Fay
Delighted you liked my take on love spiller - thank you muchly.
Agree with your lines, agree with the quote. The orchestra of love.
So very true Fay, love overcomes everything in our lives.
Andy
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