Lit by the flame
of newfound
peace within
the love I find.
I'm am led
step by step
into the light
where peace itself heralds
each new dawning.
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dusk arising (
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you've just put words
to what, all
my accumulated dreams
amount to..
(what a wonderfully, realisable
utopia
you paint, for us to strive towards)
thank you! dear Poet
I guess I am lucky to have my situation. Now I must appreciate it before it changes. Peace feels great. Thank you LBM.
This is pure contentment, and that's a good place to be. Also, very comforting, and that's not bad either.
I'm so lucky to be at peace at the moment. How permanent it is remains to be seen, Thank you.
I love this one dusk, it's unlike anything I've read from you before.great job my friend,I pray you continue have this peace you have found
LOL blue orchid, how often do you check out my work though? I have posted a few similar verses recently. Thank you for your kind comment.
I am unable to respond to the comment from ForeverJesus6 because he has me on ignore.
I ve noticed your style has of writing seems different,I have a question though,did you find the Lord or fall in love,both have similar feelings and emotional connections.is there anything I should pass along to Dion,dusk?
LOL I rejected christianity over forty years ago. Human beings are spiritual beings blue orchid. We have always been spiritual beings. Men created christianity and tried to convince us that there was no other way. Similarly men in other places created diferent religions. Organised religions were created and tailored througout their histories to control mankind. How do I know this.. because I have researched. I did not reject christianity easily.
But goodness, charity, caring and love etc existed long before anyone tried to create an organised religion. I listen to the spiritual nature of mankind within me and know some of it's rewards. I do not preach it, there is no need, nor do I try to convert others.
As regards love, I have long been in love with life and the world around us, nothing new for me in that. My poetry reflects this often, see 'gardens of hell' on 26th jan or 'within the depths of beyond' on 22nd jan.... see what you think of those.
Alright,I totally respect that and you dusk,at least you can find peace in this chaotic world.best wishes
Melissa Crown
Step by step your lines lead to peace and love - a beautiful place to be my dear friend and thank you for sharing it.
Thank you Fay. Yes I am at peace with the world and my humble place in the scheme of things.
I am truely glad that you found this peace.
... and a peace that surpasses all understanding will guard your heart.
Persistence is key
And that’s the dream that heart aspires for
That’s the fantasy that mind paints
What a beautiful poetry
Giving me positive vibes dear dusk
Thanks for the beautiful lines
Not a fantasy for me though spiller, i'm at peace with the world and how I fit into it.
I aspire to be like you then
So much chaos both inside and out
Lovely lines, serene.
Thank you Rozina.
Wonderful words d a, may that light of peace be forever with you.
Andy
I hope so too, I think it took it's time arriving. Thank you Andy.
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