I wonder what your face would look like on
the mornings I get to wake up next to you
Snug and mellow like a warm cup of
hot chocolate?
How soft would your curls feel as I glide a
path of trembling fingers through your
long hair?
How long before the soft flutter of your
eyelashes reveal to me the most magnetic
color of brown?
And somewhere during my prolonged golden
hour of worship
My eyes would have wandered to your slightly
parted lips
And suddenly I want you to taste all the words
I couldn’t say
- Author: writteninthestars ( Offline)
- Published: February 4th, 2022 00:57
- Comment from author about the poem: For a really special girl in my life right now.
- Category: Love
- Views: 23
- Users favorite of this poem: FallenAngel1π, writteninthestars
Comments5
Lovely poem .
This is really beautiful.
ermm, dear poet
if you're waking up, next
to the person
you're enamoured by
then simply, look
at them, and then
there's no need need to wonder
'what your face would look like'...
lol
(forgive me, I get silly
on Friday morning's..
thank you! for sharing such a poetic wording
of a feeling, we can all relate to)
a great read!
I love the synesthetic ending. "Taste all the words" Really goes to show the intensity of love, intense enough that words of endearment becomes sensorial. Nice. π
Beautiful,do you mind if I steal it for a very special girl in my life right now,lol I'm kidding of course. Great piece,hope you don't mind if I fav it. Cheersπ»πβοΈπ
haha, iβm happy you enjoyed it! xx
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