out from a lifetime's wreckage
the torrent of an ambitious ego
crashed down as a waterfall
to the splendor of all observant
only to find cool rested solace
in the comfort of millpool calm
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dusk arising (
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they say we have to reach rock bottom
before we find ourselves
and there's no better source of solace
than realising more of our own truth's..
insightful words, as-ever Dusk
I'll be pondering this lines
of worded acceptance, for a while:
'crashed down as a waterfall
to the splendor of all observant
only to find cool rested solace'
Torrential crash and then solace and calm. Wonderful image.
Which line should I call best
You led me in a dilemma
Struck with the title, the imagery and the calmness felt
As if it’s telling stop by and live in moment
A beautiful poetry dear dusk
Where my emotions played turmoil and finally a calmness reading and going through elegant lines
You're a magician with words,..you can turn them into a beautiful image.🌄🏜🏞🏔🌋⛲️🎇🎆
May that solaca always be with you d a.
Andy
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