Empty spaces
I have always hated them
their feel of nothingness
their uncomfortable grip of lonely
their empty touch that chills the spine
Empty
Like a blank page
With nothing to tell
All nothingness
Void of thought or emotion
Lifeless
Silent like the grave
Ever demanding to be noticed
An abyss that’s always taking and never giving back
I hate empty spaces
Especially those in the heart
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Author:
Frank Moses Phiri (
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Comments5
Yessss. Holes in our hearts are like itches we can't scratch, they're always there and annoying. 👏👏Good job!
thanks 😊
"An abyss that’s always taking and never giving back"
Great use of words and images.
thank you
Reading this i couldn't help but think.... i disagree, empty spaces are there for placing good things into... no rubbish to be cleared away... they are clean and receptive.... Oh that my heart were so empty of the rubbish that has been left there by past loves.
thats another interesting perspective but our feelings and experience towards the empty spaces differ, I appreciate the comment ande making me see the other side
This is very well written and deeply felt
🤗🤗🤗
This is very well written and deeply felt
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