Abysmal actions kept the attraction.
Cyclone reactions blew behind their direction.
Onlookers whispered words of their destruction.
It became their addiction to float directionless in
dark spaces.
One day the girl opened her eyes to see light seep through
her dark spaces.
Floating directionless wasn't enough for her existence.
She realized they were just a fatal attraction.
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Destiny\'s Perspective (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 10th, 2022 03:38
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
empowering, and an important message
that its never too late, once
realisation is awakened
that salvaging of a life's, worth
can always be achieved..
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
Thank you for taking the time out of your early morning to read and comment on my poem! It's sad how common that this situation occurs in people's lives especially when the person is younger. I wanted to bring this to light with a message of hope that you can have a brighter future. We all deserve a healthy love towards ourselves, for life and from others. I am pleased that the message came across clearly to you.
Life is so precious. Thanks for this amazing work! You wrote it well and imagery used is splendid. 👍
Thank you for your sweet comment and taking the time to read this poem! It really means a lot. I am glad you enjoyed the imagery. Also thanks for requesting my friendship! 😊
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