Emptiness is all I see
When I close my eyes
The emptiness a tree feels without it's leaves
The emptiness an ocean experiences without water
The emptiness a man know without his soul
The emptiness the night holds without the moon
The emptiness of a desert without sand
The emptiness of a lover without his love
The emptiness of a day without the sun
That's how I feel
When you're not around
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Author:
Richard Gbadebo (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2022 09:39
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a message to someone you're missing ❤️
- Category: Love
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Comments2
should I tell that's how I also feel when she's not around.
reality poem, tasty and precise
Thanks Amon ❤️
WOW! I mean you truly said it with this poem. I can totally relate to that "emptiness" one feels when in the absence of a loved one. The analogies were also so vivid and real! Amazing job! 💖✨
Thanks Rocky ❤️
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