Emptiness

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Emptiness is all I see 

When I close my eyes

The emptiness a tree feels without it's leaves

The emptiness an ocean experiences without water

The emptiness a man know without his soul

The emptiness the night holds without the moon

The emptiness of a desert without sand 

The emptiness of a lover without his love

The emptiness of a day without the sun

That's how I feel

When you're not around

  • Author: Richard Gbadebo (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 17th, 2022 09:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a message to someone you're missing ❤️
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 13
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  • Amon

    should I tell that's how I also feel when she's not around.
    reality poem, tasty and precise

  • Rocky Lagou

    WOW! I mean you truly said it with this poem. I can totally relate to that "emptiness" one feels when in the absence of a loved one. The analogies were also so vivid and real! Amazing job! 💖✨



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