Rushing Waters.

Goldfinch60



I went down to My River

It’s waters rushed by

Rushed by in waves of brown

The water from the hills

Coming into My River

Filling it to overflowing

The calmness removed

But I know that soon all will be well

As the water will run away

Leading My River into normality

It’s clear green waters once more

Once more with me

Guiding me in my wonderful life

Until that day

That day when My River

And My Spirit become one

Taking us to eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 19th, 2022 02:07
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 41
  • User favorite of this poem: Paul Bell.
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Erm, I didn't fancy the River the other day. I might have gone blown into it by the hurricane!

    • Goldfinch60

      I can understand that Orchi, especially with the weights of your singing pulling you down. LOL

      Andy

    • Paul Bell

      I think that's a great place to end up, especially if it's brought you joy through the years.

      • Goldfinch60

        Yes Paul that joy has always been with me, thank you.

        Andy

      • spilleronsheet

        As always beautiful and serene dear Andy

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you spilleronsheet, most kind.

          Andy

        • FallenAngel1🕊

          I went down to my river the other day,lol it wasn’t flowing so well😂 it’s frozen. Great write Andy. They really are a wonder,always moving,sometimes so calm and serene. Other’s so ferocious and destructive,...hmmm,are we still talking about a river?lol😂 cheers 🍻🕊

          • Goldfinch60

            I have spoken and written about My River for many years it is so important in my life. Thank you WJG.

            Andy

          • Crowns4Christ

            Sounds like the beauty of God's creations being muddied up by hate,and being pristine by Jesus's second coming.very good Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              This is nothing to do with Jesus, this is Nature's wonder and has nothing to do with your beliefs in the lies that christianity is making you believe. As far as I am concerned Jesus was the first Hippie NOT the son of god who you are being forced to believe.

              Andy

              • Crowns4Christ

                I'm sorry you feel that way Andy, I really am, I am simply sharing what your poem reminds me of.
                It is beautiful

              • Rozina

                Serenity. Lovely poem.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Rozina.

                  Andy



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