Bringing Us Closer Tanka.

Goldfinch60



She stands before me,

Her bright eyes shine into mine,

Our love is so strong,

Each day it grows much stronger,

Bringing us ever closer.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 20th, 2022 02:13
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 18
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  • Neville


    splendid aint just any word, it fits perfectly & fittingly here, in this little rectangular comments box ..
    Tis after all said & done a darn near perfect Tanka sir ... Neville 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A lovely write Gold.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

      • Rozina

        Beautiful words. Very happy for you.

        • Goldfinch60

          So kind Rozina, thank you.

          Andy

        • spilleronsheet

          So beautiful dear Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind spilleronsheet.

            Andy



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