A Long Pretence
After all this time,
it has
only just dawned
on me
I was never really
any different
from all the rest
was I, after all ..
And now,
of course, there is
no us ..
Not barely a trace
Nor is there
any point or use in
either of us
pretending otherwise,
is there darling .. x
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Author:
Neville (
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Sadly, some women judge a guy on the last guy, and so it goes on.
At some point in time, the penny drops, and you'll be off with Sally.
that was so very yesterday Paul .. I'm two Sally's in already .. but that's just between you n me mate .. gotta go for the sympathy vote when your a vet .. & I dont mean a veterinarian .. they always get the vote & I'm a life long Sagittarian ................................... cheers all the same 🙂
Sad when this happens. All the best to you. X X X
Cheers Roz ............................... x
Sad thought but time to call it a day when there is not even a trace of the feeling of Us - -- pretence starts to hurt when playing dead roles. Marvelous use of few -worded lines again mi clever amigo........ x and x
thanks for being in my corner Fay .......................................................... always appreciated & true .. x
If you're not meeting her now - should I?! lol.
Go for it Mr. O .. but you have been warned ........................................... just be sure to wear your body cam at all times & some kind of covert listening devices are strategically placed around the neighbourhood .................................... 🙂
Oh another way of saying you were living a lie... Sometimes we live in a fairy tale made for one... Excellent Writing
whilst accepting full responsibility for this little scribble, I steadfastly refuse to accept any liability whatsoever for the lies, corruption & or deceit that served as the inspiration for it .. however, I do thank you kindly & seriously for visiting today Dove 🙂
Keep sailing on the only difference is how each of us brave the storms.
I always admire your open heart
Thanks for sharing my friend
.. you have just penned me a poem in its very own write Dan .. thank you my friend .. post it proper before someone nicks it ............................................ hope all is presently good in your world 🙂
Presently I'm wherever I need to be my friend, ruff with the smooth and always grateful to your inspiration...
Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very fleeting good moments and enjoy that walk with your hound. Best wishes.
Hi Dave, ta for taking time to tap in mate .. Tis a good job the missus didn't catch wot you just said you old dog 🙂
Very emotive words Neville but there will be some one out there.
Andy
You are a golden ray of sunshine Andy .......................................... Neville 🙂
A sad poetic ode of heart singing melancholy
I hope it’s just words
Not true, but if it is, good time shall be soon coming around with a beautiful maiden wrapped around…
rest assured spills, I have lavished a whole container load of poetic license .. although, I was there once ......... I have no objection to you sending a maiden around tho' 🙂
Lol
No thanks dear Neville
Brilliant writing as always but I think we have all felt this way with someone possibly when we were younger. Love this!
Aww, you are way too kind Cristina8 .. it is so good to see you are back .. I sure hope you are gonna stay around MPS I am sure others beside myself have missed you 🙂
That I am not so sure of but I will post a poem late in the day and give it a try!
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