From the moonlit heavens in the sky
Such peacefulness unveiled before me
I could hardly believe my eyes
Soft beams of moon light far and wide
Brought me to my knees
From the moonlit heavens in the sky
An Angel descended and then sighed
Asked If heaven was where I needed to be
I could hardly believe my eyes
My heart was heavy, I started to cry
I was dying, yet my soul couldn't see
From the moonlit heavens in the sky
So, I asked the Angel kindly Why?
Why was she now coming for me?
I could hardly believe my eyes
Then I felt my soul lift as I sighed
Radiant Moon beams was all I could see
From the moonlit heavens in the sky
I could hardly believe my eyes
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Author:
Dove (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 20th, 2022 07:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Was trying to write about nature, and this is what came out! 😎
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
A very good style of telling and showing by Villanelle spacing a scene where dreams can feel like frightening real - wonderful read Dove and thank you for sharing.
Awe, thank you kindly Fay! Such a beautiful comment. Some dreams can be frightening
or confusing... Thanks for stopping by
I know for a fact these aint easy .. but I know you love a challenge & you certainly excel at them my friend ........... Top notch ma'am .. N x
Thanks again dear Neville, as always you're so kind and generous! Have a great day
Very nice lines. An enjoyable read.
Thanks again ! Much appreciated
Beautiful words Dove.
Andy
Thanks Andy!!!😀 Much appreciated
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