Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I've always wanted to see
the extinction
of my enemies
the satisfaction it gave me
when a rat dies
knowing it can no longer
chew up my shoes
eat all my food
invade my space
defend itself
feeds its kids
get older
this feeling
when a rat dies
I feel safe
connected again
maybe even relaxed
I can never forgive
for being
it needs to be exterminated
it needs to be die
simply because.
I don't know
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: February 22nd, 2022 00:03
- Comment from author about the poem: One of the first poems I wrote for a poetry workshop class on Zoom. It was fun but I hate poetry. shout out to www.priceofwisdom.art probably the top 5 websites of all time in my book including my poetic side!
- Category: Reflection
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I honestly love the "abstract" style of your poetry and even You, like from what I've read, as a person. I can relate to your creativity and I love your unique flair. (check my bio, I also strive to "distort the norms") Also does the title have a deeper meaning, or is it an arbitrary name? 💖✨
It’s honestly a honor for you to even notice my own style ive been working on it for twenty years haha. I definitely will check your stuff out. The title was just a prompt used to engage us into writing I believe it was a excerpt about the harms of whale hunting
Wow how interesting. Also thanks for your consideration! BTW I would LOVE to purchase your book but to put it plain-spoken, I'm a minor and my "daddy" runs my life 😞 and if you don't know the type of person my father is just read my rant on him, "My Silent Protest." So I know for a fact he won't allow me to buy it. But I just want to let you know that I support your projects and when I turn 18 and gain independency I'll put it on my list to get your entire anthology! Have a great day! 💖💖
I’m currently in development of my 4th book and I want to make it Rated E for everyone on earth. Can you tell me what about poetry makes it not rated E Ofcourse besides the context
Hey, pardon the late response. Also it's not necessarily the context of the book but it's the fact that my father is overly strict. He believes that anything that doesn't have to do with religion or that won't "edify" your life is a waste of time. It's overdone and he's just like that. I guess it's kind of impossible to make a book that EVERYONE will be "ok" with reading since people just have different views on life that are, to put it plain, bs. What can we do about it. 🤷♂️
It’s honestly a honor for you to even notice my own style ive been working on it for twenty years haha. I definitely will check your stuff out. The title was just a prompt used to engage us into writing I believe it was a excerpt about the harms of whale hunting
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