Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I've always wanted to see
the extinction
of my enemies
the satisfaction it gave me
when a rat dies
knowing it can no longer
chew up my shoes
eat all my food
invade my space
defend itself
feeds its kids
get older
this feeling
when a rat dies
I feel safe
connected again
maybe even relaxed
I can never forgive
for being
it needs to be exterminated
it needs to be die
simply because.
I don't know
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: February 22nd, 2022 00:03
- Comment from author about the poem: One of the first poems I wrote for a poetry workshop class on Zoom. It was fun but I hate poetry. shout out to www.priceofwisdom.art probably the top 5 websites of all time in my book including my poetic side!
- Category: Reflection
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I honestly love the "abstract" style of your poetry and even You, like from what I've read, as a person. I can relate to your creativity and I love your unique flair. (check my bio, I also strive to "distort the norms") Also does the title have a deeper meaning, or is it an arbitrary name? 💖✨
It’s honestly a honor for you to even notice my own style ive been working on it for twenty years haha. I definitely will check your stuff out. The title was just a prompt used to engage us into writing I believe it was a excerpt about the harms of whale hunting
Wow how interesting. Also thanks for your consideration! BTW I would LOVE to purchase your book but to put it plain-spoken, I'm a minor and my "daddy" runs my life 😞 and if you don't know the type of person my father is just read my rant on him, "My Silent Protest." So I know for a fact he won't allow me to buy it. But I just want to let you know that I support your projects and when I turn 18 and gain independency I'll put it on my list to get your entire anthology! Have a great day! 💖💖
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