Just a Series of Thoughts

Neville

Just a Series of Thoughts

 

Like a florin pinned

And

Smiling down

Through

Random clouds

Silent

Though on reflection

Maybe

More like some

Rogue

Half-crown, he thought

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2022 04:39
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 61
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I love your musings amigo.....x

    • Neville



      what else is a meta for, other than for metaring .. I love the fact you are so consistently supportive of my scribbles Fay .. thankz for the zillionth time 🙂 x

    • spilleronsheet

      Even the series of thoughts could be so deep
      He turned into a romantic actor
      That moon shining amidst the grey clouds
      Carrying the hearts of lovers around
      Good one dear Neville
      Enjoyed a lot while reading it

      • Neville



        You made this old fella feel very pleased with himself spills .. and humbled .. and I thank you for it .. x

      • L. B. Mek

        we do think ourselves fake
        when digging deep
        in-to those truth's, we keep
        for
        we get to see, too clearly
        just how many faces
        we adorn, to survive
        this incessant hurricane
        of chaotic, absurdity
        we call, life..
        (love how you worded this poem
        especially poignant
        in our current stormy season)
        'The, Poet' is back
        all is well then
        all is well

        • Neville



          Bless you brother Mek ........................................................... Neville 🙂

        • Christina8

          Beautiful metaphors my friend. I like this poem very much!

          • Neville



            Thanks Christina I always appreciate your visits & true ..................... Neville

          • orchidee

            I heard some jokes about nine-bob notes, and four pound notes. Sounds dodgy to me, that coinage! lol.
            Was decimalisation about 5 million years ago now?
            You appreciating my visits too?
            What 'they' saying? - Do shut up a while Orchi. lol.

            • Neville



              Maybe we should call it a night Mr. O ..................................................... 🙂

            • Dove

              Well, I had to word search florin.. But after reading its meaning, I had a huge smile! Definitely great metaphor for the moon...

              • Neville



                Cheers D .................................. N 🙂

              • Rozina

                The beautiful moon - loved your metaphor.

                • Neville



                  that's what a metaphor is for .. bless you Roz ................................... Neville

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half crown.................. (I hope that's right - I'm mostly asleep then. Extrapolating from sunny experience)

                  • Neville



                    I was hoping that someone might eventually arrive at that very interpretation mate so well done .. there are so many other possibilities that I can personally visualise, but I dont wanna spoil it/them & anyway, I have a bit of an advantage and a little insight into the whole thing .... give yourself a pat on the back you old dog ................................................. Neville

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      Nev, give us all the possibilities later, when the rush had died down please.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Neville your words must surely be worth a guinea.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        Thanks Andy, but not a word to Mr. O .. he might want to mate with one or two of em ................ N 🙂



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