Alluring shade portrayed against many blades
Suffocating with sunrise blood
Choking air and time with its fatiguing chime
Under a violent sky
Radiant sun emanates against the absorbing grays
Warm as an arctic flood
Smoking the ocean ceiling, the waves they rise
Tasting the evanescent dry
Rising on shallow ground, blood between my teeth
Head below surface yet grounded feet
Drowning in the hazel maze of totality
Only to awake an hour later
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Author:
ProfessionalPaperDigester (
Offline) - Published: February 24th, 2022 04:40
- Comment from author about the poem: Its a intentionally confusing poem, about a very simple subject, the morning sun
- Category: Nature
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I'm just looking out to thunder snow, thinking, this radiant sun, where the hell is it. Okay, off to build a snowman.
Have fun out there
It's intentionally confused me, I'll tell ya that! lol.
Erm, it might not take much to make me a confused laddie! heehee.
I'm the same way
I honestly love poetry that's "confusing." Because that's the whole point of poetry: It looks like a lot of nonsense at first but after digging deeper and deeper and interpreting each line it all connects to form something grand. 💖
Of course, not all poetry needs a "Deeper Meaning" but all my favorites always have something layered between.
What's not to like .. thoroughly enjoyed my fine literary friend ... N 🙂
Enjoyed reading the lines. And the sun is super hot now in the tropics.
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