No I was not ready for resentment to hit the stage, even more so for the choices I alone had made.
Each moment to last a life time of only passed regret, but now I feel the need to clear this out my chest.
If not you'll find me sunken before my used by date, as the structure begins to crumble under the hidden weight
With my heart in my hand can I change this plan, to undo the wickedness that is smothering all I am.
To replace joy for the gifts I get to hold in my palms, letting the sadness be finished watering what should stand out with pride.
I send this to the universe and any trying to brave the changes in their own tides, may we give any guilt we carry over to the sun, moon and stars.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not easily...... been a while that I've cried wrote, cried and healing that part that's been stuck for a long time. Truly appreciate all that are on this site old and new, plus so many I miss and wish I knew. Nevertheless keep up the write you are an amazing light! Much peace and respect, I'll find a picture tomorrow this has just been done... lol
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Hi Dan! Wonderful write, but I love the last line about giving the guilt to the sun moon and stars. Good advice!
Hey my friend when i saw your name I did get a big smile on my face, your my signal that the last line is good to go and may my guilt trouble me no more.
Thank you and again really appreciate your time
You are welcome Dan!! I was happy to make you smile!
I definitely feel you have, as expressed in the poem, resolved something conclusively and are moving forward. Thanks for that, Dan - there's a lot of strength in there.
Thank you my friend and I will admit last night sleep was alot more peaceful!
Hope you have a fantastic day!
I really like this Dan, thank you my friend for opening your heart
Even better when I see it shine through o others eyes, thank you and always appreciate your time
Emotive words Dan but you know you have the light within you, you have moved on so far in your life that this is just a blip that will soon be behind you.
Andy
As I get ready for my 140 mile journey I shall try to remember and keep it on the road with me my friend!
Always a pleasure buddy
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