Sunny the noon
with pair of wings flapping by
two butterflies
lost under sight
astonished the heavens beside
Upon the canvas painted tonight
with dark grey clouds surrounding the sky
tears like downpour
dampening the earth beside
loose are the emotions
that flow by….
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spilleronsheet (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2022 12:52
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What a lovely poem! I love the imagery that your painting and the analogy between the passing of a day and humans and emotions. Great job on this one. 💖
Thanks dear Rocky
Though my emotions and write were really flipped today
Dear Spiller,
Let Emotions flow
And they leave you out of low
Giving way to newness to grow
And you would then mellow !
Deep feelings captured well with your poetic heart!!
A beautiful poetic reply
Rubbing the calmness inside
To the wounds, a blow of balm
To make the heal fast
A reply with a poetic rhyme
Under the surface a great advice
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
really beautiful! your focus on nature and your ability to paint pictures actually remind me a bit of Emily Dickinson.
Thank you so much dear Junia
You flatter me dear friend, to bear a resemblance to the great poetess is a big complement to me
Even being an iota of her, makes me suffice
I am glad you liked it
Just trying to be an artist, painting with emotions
But don’t know how well can I even justify
Thanks a lot for your kind comments
Beautiful poem. Thank you.
Thanks a lot dear Rozina
What a FAB title & I love the poem too
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a little bit of heaven soaked in tears
🙂
Thank you so much dear Neville
Yep the heavens soaked in tears
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