Flip

spilleronsheet

Sunny the noon 

with pair of wings flapping by 

two butterflies 

lost under sight 

 

astonished the heavens beside

Upon the canvas painted tonight 

with dark grey clouds surrounding the sky 

tears like downpour 

dampening the earth beside 

loose are the emotions 

that flow by….

 

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  • Rocky Lagou

    What a lovely poem! I love the imagery that your painting and the analogy between the passing of a day and humans and emotions. Great job on this one. πŸ’–

    • spilleronsheet

      Thanks dear Rocky
      Though my emotions and write were really flipped today

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Dear Spiller,

      Let Emotions flow
      And they leave you out of low
      Giving way to newness to grow
      And you would then mellow !

      Deep feelings captured well with your poetic heart!!

      • spilleronsheet

        A beautiful poetic reply
        Rubbing the calmness inside
        To the wounds, a blow of balm
        To make the heal fast
        A reply with a poetic rhyme
        Under the surface a great advice
        Thanks a lot dear Vamsi

      • junia

        really beautiful! your focus on nature and your ability to paint pictures actually remind me a bit of Emily Dickinson.

        • spilleronsheet

          Thank you so much dear Junia
          You flatter me dear friend, to bear a resemblance to the great poetess is a big complement to me
          Even being an iota of her, makes me suffice
          I am glad you liked it
          Just trying to be an artist, painting with emotions
          But don’t know how well can I even justify
          Thanks a lot for your kind comments

        • Rozina

          Beautiful poem. Thank you.

        • Neville


          What a FAB title & I love the poem too
          ............................
          a little bit of heaven soaked in tears
          πŸ™‚

          • spilleronsheet

            Thank you so much dear Neville
            Yep the heavens soaked in tears



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