Intention outstripped
his power of reason
Leaving him naked
—a meadow deflowered
(Dreamsleep: February, 2022)
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Author:
Kurt Philip Behm (
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What a lovely landscape! Changing of the seasons I see? 👀
Thanks Rocky
Kurt,
Brevity is ‘packing a punch’ as only you can accomplish, my dear Poet, in this brief and powerful write. I’m probably repeating myself…but it’s worth it.
The naked aggressor ‘deflowering a meadow’ is a big mistake, IMO.
Laura🌻
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