Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
It’s neither
chef or ingredients
It’s both
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: February 28th, 2022 14:09
- Comment from author about the poem: Permaculture is the answer for utopia in all worlds we adapt to that lifestyle we become our better selves. Shout out to www.priceofwisdom.art this is also a future ukhai from my future book “is this it?” By Ok Waleed.
- Category: Haiku
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Comments2
I love the way your poetry rolls off the tongue. It's so lively and vivid. Btw the message of this poem is so profound. Like wow you really said it all with these 3 lines. The world is a reciprocal system all relying on each other in order to function properly. The way you metaphorized that with cooking is ingenious. Bravo! (Btw you said this is going to be a "ukhai" to you upcoming book, so is a 'ukhai' your own abstract form a haiku?) 💖👀
You truly are a masterful poet with a descriptive but yet simplified eye. Thank you for understanding me. And yes
To create a ukhai
you need to tell the story
with 3 lines
Not too long
3 very short lines that tell a full story! Wonderful!
Thank you!!!
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