Rain or shine I'll write my rhymes

Poetic Dan



I shall continue to rain and shine giving all the bows I feel inside, in every day that she grows so do I 

 

Letting childishly behaviour run wild to find the hearts deepest desires, trying to forget nothing but natures giggles and smiles 

 

Seeing the horizon reflected of her wide eyed lashes, ready to be mesmerised by all lifes little antics 

 

She is one of four, from two ships that joined six years ago as one. Truly welcomed aboard blessed and adore, with a crew ready to sail through the seven seas and more. 

 

Until the day I shine back down on them, I'll do my best to leave it better than before. Remembering each moment was the gift, that didn't need looking for. 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 28th, 2022 17:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Letting it all go to keep up with the flow, keep up the write my friends. Much peace and respect
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Crowns4Christ, L. B. Mek.
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Comments5

  • Crowns4Christ

    A very sweet ode to your little ones Dan,any parent will completely understand your love for your children,we love them as God loves us,His children

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you so much for your kindness and support.
      Always appreciated

    • Rozina

      Very enjoyable read. Thank you.

      • Poetic Dan

        An absolute pleasure, as is your time.
        Thank you

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful words Dan and such a great video, she is so very very happy and I am sure she will always be that way.

        Andy

        • Poetic Dan

          She is a delightful but like any a handful at times but one you never wish to lose.
          Thank you Andy

        • orchidee

          Good write and video Dan.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you buddy, always good to see you.

          • L. B. Mek

            'in every day that she grows, so do I'..
            I can just imagine
            the shining beacon
            you are to them all,
            in the now
            of blessed breath and good health..
            (it's a privilege to call
            such an earnest, kind hearted
            soldier
            in this warring chaos of life
            a friend)
            and a cherished Poet, as that cherry on top..
            lol
            so happy for you!

            • Poetic Dan

              I'll be honest my friend this was written when my spirit was higher, today like the weather its clouded right over.

              Even got a message that I don't believe in my own magic and tbh it was not wrong, then I read your comment and its like the glue to my inner song.

              For what I fail to see in myself I'm reminded by amazing souls like your own! That privilege is returned and welcomed like the morning sun!

              Thank you for joining me on this journey



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