Inside the mind of Josie

FallenAngel1🕊

She's living in a different world from ours

A frightening landscape that could be on 'the dark side of the moon'

The dark side for you and me

But when she's there,she sees sparkling colours of light for as far as her mind can see

She feels a tingling sensation of pure ecstasy that vibrates through her body with the force of a billion hypernovas

She can't help but to give in

To just let herself go

To completely loose herself in the light of the darkness

It touches her very soul

And she delightfully dines.

Written by;W.J.G.🕊

 

 

 

  • Author: W.J.G.🕊 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2022 12:07
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Wow this was great! I mean the hypernova comparison to euphoria is so clever. It really makes the reader feel this intense sensation and delivers the message. The main idea of accepting the darkness and living in the "sinful" is also understood and relatable. We're all constantly doing things that would be looked down upon but hey, if it makes us happy and if we aren't hurting anyone, live your life! ✨💖😅 Good job!

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Thanks Rocky. I felt her behaviour needed explanation.🍻✌️🕊🌞

    • orchidee

      Good write Angel.
      I dunno about dark side of the moon - I'm in Cuckoo Land, probably most of the time! heehee. Are the two places similar? And how would we know?
      I talk some rot! lol.

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Oh yes they're very similar,it's just the difference of the one who flew over the cuckoos nest and the one who flew to close to the sun🌞😜

    • dusk arising

      Speaks to me of the escapism we all need. A place of comfort and relaxation where we are free to be our otherworldly selves unrestrained.

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Escapism we all need,but not all are willing to delve into due to fear of judgment,amongst other things,I'm sure. Thanks dusk🕊🌞

    • Rozina

      Yes you are right. So hard sometimes to have to be the role model for our children, our staff, our family…..Escape!

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Yes it is. Thank you Rozina🍷🍷🌹🕊🌞

    • kitty the naughty poet

      Your mind is amazing 👏

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Aww thanks so much Katie.🍷🍷🌹😘🤗💞🌞



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