The hypocritic

spilleronsheet

Sand dunes across the desert 

the monsoon rains across the south east

the insanity of tyrant 

the so called well wishes

And the bows without arrows

 

 

are nothing but only letters

without spirits 

like a flip 

she moves across the statements

 

 

in her heart 

she covets the strongest resistance 

but overtly a sweet smile

in her hypocritical  mind

One goes crazy overnight 

 

as a cliffhanger 

Lie at tenterhooks

who cares about how one looks

who cares about how you feel

 

 

your nothing but empty words I see….

 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2022 10:25
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 44
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  • Rocky Lagou

    A message to the hypocrites. It's a façade that is drawn-out and overused. Everything will eventually come to light! Great use of imagery and the lines are filled with purpose! 💖💖✨✨✨

    • spilleronsheet

      You saw through my thoughts dear Rocky….thanks for reading under the lines…

    • dusk arising

      Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have been assured many a time that duplicity is my fine point.

      • spilleronsheet

        Thank you so much
        But I don’t think I can match up to the perfection of your words dear Dusk

      • Rozina

        Hypocrites abound. They say things to make themselves look good, but do something else entirely. Cannot be trusted. Very real.

        • spilleronsheet

          Sure it is. Dear Rozina, life is colourful with all creeds of humans. Many may be cruel but atiwadi few will be kind enough with no double face.

        • Neville


          the fact they exist at all does not sadden me .. the fact that there are so many of them saddens me as does the fact that we are the only species on the planet that behaves in such a way ............................nice one spills .............................. Neville

          • spilleronsheet

            A very thoughtful answer dear Neville….looks like, just like me you have surely met a few hypocritics…but its alright, and much better if they were exposed…

          • Paul Bell

            There is nothing worse than shaking the hand of a dickhead, but sadly at some point we're put in a position where we need to grin and bare it.
            As long as we can still think bad thoughts of them.

            • spilleronsheet

              That’s the most practical answer i assume….rather to be always victim, why not be witty to give those who deserve the dirt that they deserve….

            • Vamsi Sudha

              Dear Spiller !!
              Hypocrites punish themselves, a turmoil which they can't express but face with a sweet smile. Its better to be transparent and face the challenge than being hypocritic. Dare the truth , and you Win !! As usual magic of words by you 🙂

              • spilleronsheet

                A beautiful and a compassionate comment dear Vamsi
                A hypocritical is both bad for others as well for themselves
                A criminal as well as victim
                Thanks for giving me this perception
                I won’t hate the hypocritics now

                • Vamsi Sudha

                  Wonderful, be sober with them as they are punishing themselves !! You got me right 🙂

                • sorenbarrett

                  Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it seems that this poem is far deeper. The madness that it brings and the emptiness that surrounds it.

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Thanks dear reader for diving deep inthose lines
                    Looks like you could reach near to the bottomless spine
                    The world of hypocrites that bejewel

                  • Thejaswini

                    Great one! 🙂



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