Today is Friday tomorrow is Thursday
Hours into minutes grow
As I cut the board longer its weakness grew stronger
The future through the past into the present did flow
Everything's wrong the beginning and end are gone
Reality’s an illusion
Although there’s no link everything’s in sync
But for nothing there’s a solution
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: March 3rd, 2022 11:22
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I deny in full agreement where bright colours lead me through darkness.
I enjoyed your piece for your clever wordplay. The font was difficult though LOL.
Thank you for your review and comments. I selected the font because like the poem it made it more difficult. Oh well some choices could have always been better in this life. Thanks again
Okay, as opposed to Dusk's opinion, I personally enjoyed the font, as it fit in with the theme. I love the contradictory phrases you state and the paradoxes you opened were profound and sage. Interesting. "Reality's an illusion" 💖💖✨
Thank you Rocky for your review and comment. Reality is an illusion as are all others.
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