Connection.
In some swift spark of Infinity
I felt his shadow alter vibrations.
Dazzled, transfixed inside Forever
I heard his presence shifting dimensions.
In one burst of rhythmic connection
I tasted his spirit thirsting for mine.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: March 5th, 2022 04:10
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of weekend whimsy again - -- - do hope you enjoy.
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Comments5
A beautiful write dear Fay.
Thanks a load Mike - glad you enjoyed.
Phew! You are getting quite raw lately, Fay - and nothing wrong with that.
Raw is how you see it and that is O.K. Dave - - I tried the surreal approach to dealing with grief in which some find comfort - so glad you enjoyed the read of Connection my friend.
Weekend whimsey's always work for me Fay ...
and while we are here, take it from me would ya ...
this is wickedly wonderful with or without the whimsey word ..write on ........................................ x
indeed, it is even betterer than that, .... it is one of your bestest of this genre 🙂 x
Better than best eh - -- you spoil me did you know says she coyly - -- will try to match this genre with nipped-in versions of earlier work Nev. as lately I rather take to the phrase that "less means more". Thanking you more than very muchly for all your support.
I love this beautful write Fay! The last line is something to behold..Christina
Ah I thought that final phrase you might relate to dear Christina - - so grateful for your visit and comment on Connection.
Very relatable. Love it!
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