The power that
is within you
is sometimes stored ,
and let loose to cut
away beaches
like a giant sword
Your sound and beauty
with smell ,
has me deep
under your spell
What really
impresses me ,
is the vastness
of your beauty
You go it seems
until you touch
the sky ,
your beauty
is laid down
but
very high
Listening to you roar
I know the beauty
of your power ,
making beautiful sandy beaches
out of what you
devour
Time has disappeared to you
and space ,
and unchanged
is still
your face
There's too much of
your beauty
in my eyes
to take in
at this place and time ,
standing here at your
beautiful
sandy
shoreline
On your shoreline
I walk
and heavy tracks
I lay ,
you came in
and wiped them
all
away
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Author:
Desertwind (
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Comments4
Lovely😀
Thank you Little Dove .
'Listening to you roar
I know the beauty
of your power ,
making beautiful sandy beaches
out of what you
devour'
forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn't help
but favourably compare
these verse and your write
in totality, to the great words
of Keats:
'Oh, ye! who have your eyeballs vexed and tired,
Feast them upon the wideness of the Sea;
Oh ye! whose ears are dinned with uproar rude,
Or fed too much with cloying melody---
Sit ye near some old Cavern's Mouth and brood,'
from 'On the Sea'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14516 )
thank you! for choosing to share
a great read
'in my humble opinion'
I have never heard of Keats , I'll look him up online . If he's a poet, I never have read any poetry except on here to comment on it.
Thanks alot for your comment, you seem very knowledgeable, and the like .
I said him for Keats and I thought after I wrote it , what if it's a woman. I looked it up it was a man poet , so I guess I'm safe with the women .
Wow what a fine display you've painted with words. Truly powerful and the shortness of it is also really nice. I enjoyed the shoreline metaphor and the last lines were like a big hug. Well done! 💖
Man that's a great comment, very nice. Thanks for the comment and like.
Thanks you very much I really appreciate your comment and like .
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