Discovering self


Life seemed to be beautiful

As I jumped from my childhood pool 

But the challenges that showed up 

Made me feel incapable grownup.


Filled with the thoughts of failure 

The roots of negativity grew deeper

Pulling over the curtain darker 

Making self-image more hazier.


But your presence brought the difference

I could sense your importance

Your boonful catalyst presence 

and your forward pulling force. 


Indeed life with you meant heaven

Sujorn became the choicest garden 

Chasing away all the burden 

Making me really feel the Eden.


O man you are the special

For you crossed beyond superficial

Making life even more cordial

Giving purpose that's congenial.

















  • Author: bellflower (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2022 10:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Friendship always makes life beautiful.
  • Category: Friendship
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  • Rocky Lagou

    I love this piece! True friendship is that sense of reliance and "beyond superficial." You wrote this so well!

    • bellflower

      Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation. Indeed true friendship nurtures life.

    • sally

      nice poems, Friendship is certainly one of the blessings life gives us 🙂

      • bellflower

        Thank you. Indeed friendship is a gift of life.

      • Rainbow

        Lovely poem about friendship. I wish I had more friends I don't really have many

        • bellflower

          Yes friends are gem of life. Not all friends are good....but the real ones... it\'s okay to have less friends but quality one rather than having many but no one is helpful.
          Thank you for your kind encouraging words.

          • Rainbow

            I don't have any apart from my sister 😢 your welcome

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