Something Else Entirely

Neville

Something Else Entirely

 

Was it something else entirely, or his life that flashed

before his eyes whilst falling ..

Well maybe it was, but anyway, regardless ..

As he fell, he thought of her one more time

and of their once so perfect

and otherwise, such very uncomplicated lives ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 12th, 2022 01:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Love can be so strong at all times Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      thank you kindly, kind sir ................................... Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Well asked in your verse Nev but not to be answered is what flashes before eyes due to close soon in death......... love if experience I am sure would be forefront in all final thought - - -- such an arresting subject and so adeptly crafted my compassionate friend..................x

      • Neville



        Too kind you are Fay and truly ................................... x

      • orchidee

        Yep, sounds like me! lol.

        • Neville



          ................................. remember, you heard it first here folks ................................ ta for taking part in this social experiment Mr. O ............................................................................ Neville 🙂

        • Doggerel Dave

          If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one uncomplicated (close to) perfect relationship, then he (they) could feel justification for their existence.
          Interesting enigmatic write, Nev.

          • Neville



            That'll do nicely Dave .. ever so nicely mate, cheers .............. Neville

          • Christina8

            A wonderful love poem...perfect and uncomplicated lives are hard to come by!

            • Neville



              how magnificently kind of you C ... I effervesce with gratitude ........... Neville 🙂

            • myself and me

              He must have fallen from a very high altitude.

            • Neville


              Yes, I understand he had a bad altitude 😎

            • spilleronsheet

              “ Remembering those passing times
              Cherishing the meets we held that time
              Flashes as you chose to leave behind
              Me and the memories buried deep inside “

              A very emotive write dear Neville
              Certainly felt a past which maybe heart never left behind

              • Neville



                You got it spills ..................... many thank you's are heading your way my friend .. 😎x



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