Something Else Entirely
Was it something else entirely, or his life that flashed
before his eyes whilst falling ..
Well maybe it was, but anyway, regardless ..
As he fell, he thought of her one more time
and of their once so perfect
and otherwise, such very uncomplicated lives ..
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Neville (
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Love can be so strong at all times Neville.
Andy
thank you kindly, kind sir ................................... Neville
Well asked in your verse Nev but not to be answered is what flashes before eyes due to close soon in death......... love if experience I am sure would be forefront in all final thought - - -- such an arresting subject and so adeptly crafted my compassionate friend..................x
Too kind you are Fay and truly ................................... x
Yep, sounds like me! lol.
................................. remember, you heard it first here folks ................................ ta for taking part in this social experiment Mr. O ............................................................................ Neville 🙂
If he managed to notch up, in the course of a life at least one uncomplicated (close to) perfect relationship, then he (they) could feel justification for their existence.
Interesting enigmatic write, Nev.
That'll do nicely Dave .. ever so nicely mate, cheers .............. Neville
A wonderful love poem...perfect and uncomplicated lives are hard to come by!
how magnificently kind of you C ... I effervesce with gratitude ........... Neville 🙂
He must have fallen from a very high altitude.
Yes, I understand he had a bad altitude 😎
“ Remembering those passing times
Cherishing the meets we held that time
Flashes as you chose to leave behind
Me and the memories buried deep inside “
A very emotive write dear Neville
Certainly felt a past which maybe heart never left behind
You got it spills ..................... many thank you's are heading your way my friend .. 😎x
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