Saline Songs

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Saline Songs

 

Ground shakes
as massive breakers force reverberation.

High-boom
cracks granite's face by continual spume.

Waves race
over fall-gradation as crashes accelerate.

Liquid tunes
rebound into groundswell as sea infuses.

Water weight
grips and trapped air sighs in anticipation.

Before long
     tide ebbs to ready for more saline songs.  

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 12th, 2022 04:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: The picture shows the coastline where I live and the sea in its variant moods - - do hope you enjoy
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville


    one could very easily drown in these words ........................................... and salt of course is my only remaining addiction .................................... x

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • Doggerel Dave

    The rhythmic crash and flow of the waves and the tang of the salt all there, Fay.

    That's St Michael's Mount in the picture , isn't it? Might have past you by very close, many moons ago.

  • myself and me

    A song filled with power, love and beauty. Wonderful as always.

  • Rozina

    A fantastic coastline as described by your poem.

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful words and place to be Fay.

    Andy



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