Alone Am I Amongst The Twilight Trees
Leaves Shining and Shimmering as The Stars Above
The Silence of This Forest of The Ever Night Is Only Broken by the Sounds of The Creatures Nocturnal
Dreams Come and Stay Here in This Enchanted Grove and Dreamers Can Often be Found Resting Underneath The Trees of Twilight
No Evil Can leave its Mark here for the Magic here is The Most Strong and Unforgiving against those Who Dare Trespass and Harm
Maidens of the Moonlight Sing Songs that Soothe and Leaves One in Deep but Peaceful Slumber as these Maidens continue Playing on Instruments of Silver
I try to Resist the Lullabies sung by these Princesses of the Twilight but my Eyes Grow Heavy and my Mind is Dulled
I take a Few Steps Searching for the way out of this Forest but the Maidens Glide over to me and Embrace me in their arms
"Why do you attempt to Leave?" They ask me with Voices of Pure Melody
"Stay With us and Rest Awhile for the World Outside is Cruel and Leaves All Restless...But not here. No Not here Amongst our Trees of Twilight and Beauty."
They Caress me and Dance around me giving out Soft Laughter as their Silk Dresses Transform them into Living Art before my Eyes
"Watch Us and Be Pleasured at the Sight of us for we Desire to make you at Peace and Restfulness."
I watch them for what seems like Years Passing and my Mind is in Conflict
Should I stay here and Forsake the Restless World Outside or Should I leave my Chance of Eternal Sleep and Harmony behind?
I Stumble backward and trip on a Single Branch Plummeting me to the Forest Floor
Blackness.... The deep Blackness of Unconsciousness Envelops me until I Regain my Senses and Open my Eyes
Open my Eyes to a Nightmare
The Trees of Twilight now appear Sickly and Dripping with Sap that takes on the Appearance of Blood
Underneath them are Husks of Men Wrapped in the Silk of Spider Webs and Spider lings Scuttle out of Empty Eye Sockets and Mouths Agape in Silent Screams
The very Forest Floor is Littered with the Bones of Many who were Ensnared in this Forest of Deception and Death
Above I hear the Rustling of Long Dead Leaves and Looking Up I Behold the "Maidens" of this Twilight Forest
They are Succubi and Once they realize I'm no longer under their Spell, They Screech in Anger and Hunger
"No Matter! You Shall Sleep here in our Forest...But not the Sleep of Peace but the Sleep of DEATH!"
They Leap from the Trees with their Claws Outstretched and I in a Moment of Remembrance Pull out my Sword and Slash into the Air
Thick Violet Gore Flies through the air and lands with a Sickening Wet Splash on the Forest Floor and the Two Succubi Crashes in front of me Bleeding from Mortal Wounds
They hold onto their Stomachs as their Foul Insides Threaten to Spill Out Hissing at me but Now in Fear
"Show Me the Way out of this Accursed Place and I Shall leave you to Rest." I Demand
Sensing that their only Hope of Survival is to Obey my Request, they Lead me to the Way Out
"There is your Route Mortal...Now Leave Us to our Promised Rest." They Snarl at me
"I shall.." Two Quick Slashes and my Promise is Fulfilled Leaving them to Rest in the UnderWorld
Sheathing my Sword I now take my Leave from these Trees of Twilight and Trickery
- Author: UnderTheGreenLeaves(2022-) (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 14th, 2022 00:10
- Category: Fantasy
- Views: 19
Comments2
well polished, an enjoyable snippet
and a promising showcasing of your talent
if you enjoy this writing thing
I hope you upload your series on one of the numerous websites that cater for niche fantasy readers
'royalroad' maybe?
as well as here on MPS, of course! lol
I wish you all the best, thanks for sharing
The Only Creative Writing Website I really know and use most of the time is MyPoeticSide. I have not Heard of RoyalRoad but will give it a look out of Curiosity. Thank you for the Comments on both The Crows are Restless and Alone Am I Amongst the Twilight Trees. I Enjoy Fantasy, Science Fiction, SuperHero/Villain Fiction and Dark Fantasy which I have to say this Story is Certainly Dark Fantasy.
-GoldenRibbon00 or UnderTheGreenLeaves
I do Enjoy Writing, but not only do I Enjoy it... I Love Writing.
And please Check out my other Literary Pieces if you have not seen them yet. Just go to my Profile and click on the ones you haven't Read yet.
Again thank you for the Positive Comments L.B Mek.
-GoldenRibbon00 or UnderTheGreenLeaves
This was truly an embarkment through a journey of the mystical. So finely crafted and I really enjoyed the images you painted. Well done!
Thank You very Kindly Rocky Lagou.
I Strive to come up with at least one type of World for each of my Literary Pieces so as to have the Reader have a Journey.
Fantasy is always the most Fun to Create as it has alot of Endless Possibilites and Impossibilites to Explore as both Author and Reader.
-GoldenRibbon00 or UnderTheGreenLeaves
Most definitely! 💖
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