To make a wish don’t travel far
and never wish upon a star
for they have points
which poke the joints
and enter places quite bizarre.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: March 15th, 2022 02:42
- Category: Unclassified
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To make a wish don’t travel far
and never wish upon a star
for they have points
which poke the joints
and enter places quite bizarre.
Comments6
Oh loll good write and pic M.
Miss Berles got any stars named after her?
Not to my knowledge O but I'll ask her.
Limited number of orifices available, Michael...but corr... the picture you provide on the packet don't half make one ache....
I'm told Anusol works wonders - must get some. 😁
Noted. Diarised for 2030 and review.
He wished upon a wishbone
wanting not to be alone
his wish came true
he's got a silly moo
and all she does is moan
he wished he'd wished upon that star
cos he'd rather he'd wished for a red sports car
it could come true
either red or blue
to rush his wife to the abbotoir
So quick - I've gone all limerickless now - where did I put the thinking cap?
Ha - - - good one again Mike - - Super image that adds its points to your limerick- fun - - and I will stop star-wishing from now on.
There's a song about that - won't get the tune out my mind now.
lol
the awkward depth meaning hidden in these words
has a prerequisite of aged life experience, I think..
or maybe that's just me
(I'm still chuckling btw)
thanks Michael
I can see a great cartoon here - might draw it sometime - thanks LB.
Love your limerick. It was such a joy to read them.
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