Burnt offerings

sorenbarrett

I haven't been feeling well, since I set myself on fire

It's not only the pain, but the smell, that has left me without desire

Scarification, self mutilation,

Carving on one's limbs, starving until consciousness dims

I thought I might try, so as to understand why

But if one is going to do it, don't eschew it

Don't play, go all the way

Cremation, self immolation

Hell, the smell, of alcohol gel

Chard flesh, leaves you feeling alive and fresh

A disfiguring scar, will draw looks from afar

But after one try, skin starts to melt, bubble and fry

Open wounds sting, cloths to raw flesh cling

So I find that I am too old, to be among

Those that are so bold, leave it for the young

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Online Online)
  • Published: March 16th, 2022 05:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: Since accidentally setting fire to myself a month ago I felt it would be interesting to focus on those that hurt themselves on purpose.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Wow this was deep. I mean it was detailed and evocative. It's sad truth that all centers on mental health. We need to support those suffering. May I ask, how did you "accidently" set fire to yourself? Like I understand accidently getting a kitchen burn but like your complete body? wow I hope you're okay.

    • sorenbarrett

      Being stupid enough to hold a jug of alcohol gel while lighting the grill. It exploded setting me on fire. After a month of treatment I'll be fine. Thanks for caring enough to ask.



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