My mother said take a pen and write down this poem
Through this world of men you will always roam
Though never again can you go home
If your heart is open you will always be home
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: March 17th, 2022 08:57
- Category: Unclassified
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Yes. This is so nice. It does continue to be a "man's world" but you can pave yourself a bright future. We must fight for equality and freedom. Well done!
Thank you so much for your review and comment. I know that it is a touchy subject now days but men is used as a generic term for mankind in this sense.
Nice one because to appreciate your poem you have to see more than it's face value. The key is of course the last line.
It's all about love. Love the world and love being a part of it. It is our home.
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Wonderfully expressed! A beautiful short poem. Last line says a lot. great job!!
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Beautifully written
Beautiful poem! Mother's always say the wisest things.
Thank you for your review and comment. Yes mothers do but unfortunately they are not always recognized
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