Antigua Sonos

Kurt Philip Behm

A wagon wheel across the stones

—ancient sounds

 

The death of night, the birth of dawn

—ancient sounds

 

The blood of my enemy drips from my sword

—ancient sounds

 

A voice from beyond, heard from within

—ancient sounds

 

(Dreamsleep: March, 2022)

  • Author: Kurt Philip Behm (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 17th, 2022 10:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ».
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Comments11

  • Christina8

    A wonderful write! The different scenes captivated my mind. Awesome!

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks so much, Christina.

  • Bella Shepard

    Gentle and captivating. Lovely poem!

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks so much, Bella.

  • Rocky Lagou

    Great job! Love these little universes you take the reader through.

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks Rocky, I like your analogy.

  • dean langmuir

    nicely written

  • rrodriguez

    Ancient sounds are still around and your wisdom makes the images come alive now.

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks much, always great to hear from you.

  • LaurašŸŒ»

    Kurt,

    A great poem highlighting ā€˜ancient soundsā€™.
    I read it once and thenā€¦
    I closed my eyes and those ancient sounds became alive especially when I read
    ā€˜A wagon wheel across the stonesā€™.
    I heard another ancient soundā€¦
    the deafening sound of the approaching hobnailed Roman army. Wow!

    LaurašŸŒ»

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Great take, thanks Laura.



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