dean langmuir

-Just Be-

To be-a bee

would simply be

a being of wonder.

 

O but-to be

the me,my I can't see

 would be

a being of ponder

 

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 18th, 2022 03:52
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments4

  • L. B. Mek

    wise words, to ponder..
    thanks for sharing, dear poet

    • dean langmuir

      As always thanks for reading,and comment,you take care.

    • orchidee

      Are you 'being or not to being' as the saying goes?!

      • dean langmuir

        I 've been trying not to question that as much as I used too.thanks always for reading,take care.

      • Rocky Lagou

        Wow I love this! It's really a perfect example of "short and sweet." Those final lines are also a question to self, a sort of self-doubt I see. Great job!

        • dean langmuir

          Thanks Rocky,more about just being a being and less human,enjoy your day

        • bellflower

          Be and bee though sounds same but be means existance and bee is the existance only in one form....so be the bee you really are that makes everyone to ponder why you are who you are. Good composition.

          • dean langmuir

            Thanks,that was what I was getting at.take care.

            • bellflower

              You are most welcome



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