To be-a bee
would simply be
a being of wonder.
O but-to be
the me,my I can't see
would be
a being of ponder
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Author:
dean langmuir (
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- Category: Reflection
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To be-a bee
would simply be
a being of wonder.
O but-to be
the me,my I can't see
would be
a being of ponder
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Comments4
wise words, to ponder..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
As always thanks for reading,and comment,you take care.
Are you 'being or not to being' as the saying goes?!
I 've been trying not to question that as much as I used too.thanks always for reading,take care.
Wow I love this! It's really a perfect example of "short and sweet." Those final lines are also a question to self, a sort of self-doubt I see. Great job!
Thanks Rocky,more about just being a being and less human,enjoy your day
Be and bee though sounds same but be means existance and bee is the existance only in one form....so be the bee you really are that makes everyone to ponder why you are who you are. Good composition.
Thanks,that was what I was getting at.take care.
You are most welcome
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